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Major Noob

LV223
   From the shadows of the tunnel the  Deacon emerges, like a great black hairless tarantula. 
    It enters the Urn Chamber, walking  on fours like an ape, ducked to fit through the opening, its limbs long twists of exposed musculature and knobby joints, moving with the mindless rhythms of an arachnid.   
    Its hands and feet are out of proportion to its body, organisms unto themselves, fingers and toes like black scorpion legs cleaving deep furrows in the soil.  Some digits are missing. The wounds weep. Acid rolls off its flesh in bright clots, incinerating all it touches, random holes opening in the soil and sinking to unknown depths, shrouding the abomination in foul smoke that curls around and through its anatomy, a distorted  mass of knurls and projections like hot wax left to cool in zero gravity. Twisted meat. But it's not meat, not really, it's an imitation, a mechanism, an affront to nature. It is a lurid black executioner of sanity itself. 

    The survivors kneel behind the Head. None carry explosives, so the Synthetic has recommended rigging a flame thrower to explode, which they are doing.  Numb with fear and hampered by their gloves, it's a clumsy affair. The synthetic does not offer to help. It advises the Raijin to lock down. Too late, 6 more heavily armed crew are already speeding to the Dome.

     The Deacon advances, Urns crumpling under its weight, bursting, disintegrating, the  ground turning to a black mud of potent Eitr, absorbing into its wounds. 
    New digits erupt like fractal roots from the points of amputation, long thin branches of animate tissue, seemingly with a life of their own. 

     The survivors have seen enough to know there is no hope. They intend to commit suicide and kill the Deacon in one action. As they bend to the task, the Synthetic backs away and turns to the Altar, examines it briefly, and fits his fingers into the glyphs on the outer edge.  A green object atop the plinth like a splot from Fates' caulk gun crackles and fractures, clear fluid running from the breaks. It shatters wetly, brilliant flakes falling away to reveal a squishy protuberance. Being a Synthetic, he touches it.

    The Deacon seems to notice the Head. Or perhaps it hears something.
     At the center of the confusion of limbs a grimace appears,  nearly a meter across, like no mouth in God's kingdom.  Peeled lips reveal clenched incisors bathed in caustic saliva. With wet cracks the  jaws part impossibly wide as it vomits forth a protrusible mucosa lined with mandibles that yearn outward, regurgitating a shredded Agent. A stew of tissue, bone fragments and morsels of suit spill to the ground. Like an offering.

      The survivors see none of this, but flinch at the shriek that follows.   
    Before the Synthetic a door with strange carvings opens  like a huge blind eye, strings of transparent material  hung in the opening. He steps around the Altar, reaches out to touch the matter. 
    One of the survivors sees the door open and, panicked, runs past the Synthetic into the room, actually the top of a large pit. The Synthetic makes no move to stop him. With a yelp he slides helplessly down to the center of its only feature, a huge, clear, gelatinous membrane, 10 meters in diameter. He slides on his back to the center as if on ice,  arms and legs spread to arrest his movement, and immediately starts to sink into it like a hot marble in butter, crying out for help. But there is only the Synthetic. Out of the frying pan, and into the fire.
   An explosion erupts through the door above, the Synthetic in a protective crouch and shielded by the Altar as flame and debris surge past it. 
   Weblike strands grow around and into the wailing survivors' suit as flaming rubble strikes the far end of the shaft. The survivor begs for help. The membrane is closing over him. Diamond hard strands are now growing inside his helmet like fungus,   penetrating his skull, his eyes. Immobilizing  him. They turn red at the punctures, spreading outward. Watching, the Synthetic contacts the rescue party.

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Oneironaut 717

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Bravo! Bravo! Meister Noob Bravo! Jolly good sir jolly good - keep it coming!

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Music is a language, you see, a universal language.
- Sun Ra

DenzelTH

The Deacon digests a crew member, pukes him out, dropped in the goo, makes an egg? Or is it something new?

Im intrigued to see more of this PARANOOBIUS. =P

I Will Not Abandon Merry & Pippins Atonement To Death.

tankgirl


So cool Major!!!

I LOVE IT :)

I wonder if we could get all the installments of Paranoobius together in a thread??

I feel like I want to read them all together...

you are such a talented writer........

have you had any works published??


and by the way...

You are a VERY good tease too!! ha ha ha ha ha ha

you cant leave me there!!!!! O-O

\\\"My God, its full of stars\\\" David Bowman

Major Noob

To all- you guys make doing this fun and I'm so very happy you're enjoying it! Oneironaut, the memes you post are a riot and I show them to all my friends, it's great validation because, Tankgirl, no I'm not published, I haven't put this much work into fiction I think ever, and most people dont know me as a writer. DenzelTH, you're on the right track, but with the wrong guy. Part 1 ( in Prometheus discussions, not Prom 2 where it belongs) may shed some light.
I used to be heavily involved in music and loved to write lyrics, major psychedelia. This however is a newfound passion for me, it's all of you and of course Prometheus providing the inspiration to move forward and yes there's plenty more on the way. It's a huge responsibility! I do hope I can take this where it needs to go, and promise to do my best. I'm trying to submit new chapters every two weeks, on Friday. Stay tuned peeps!

Lone

Absolutely riveting!!!!

Major Noobius, you have done it again & left me longing for more. You are indeed very gifted, thanks for sharing your talent with us!

I am officially a Major Noob groupie! LOL

Keep watching the skies!

caenorhabhditis

I love this Synthetic when i picture him from the way you describe i see a merciless medium height ninja-like person who moves like the creepy sand-filled self mutilating surgery fetishist (clearly have forgotten name!) from the first Hellboy movie.........

the vomitting behaviour is intrigueing wonder whats gonna happen to Vickers now.... how many Raijin crew remain besides Synthetic?

"Questions will be answered!"

I LIKE WORMS! I LOVE WORMS!

caenorhabhditis

I'd like to see people do storyboards for the different installments youve given so far anyone else like that idea? mods? peeps on here are certainly artistic and creative it sets the forum apart i feel..... ive been sketching for female engineers but now i fancy drawing Synthetic!

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Oneironaut 717

Caenor, great idea yes! it would be nice seeing a visual interpretation of Meister Noob's work (Can I call you that? It has a nice ring to it!) Mods, what say you!

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Music is a language, you see, a universal language.
- Sun Ra

Oneironaut 717


Major Noob: I'm trying to submit new chapters every two weeks, on Friday

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Oh yeah, it's on!

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Lone

Terrific idea Caenor!

The site has loads of peeps with the artistic talent to match Noobmeister's writing! ;-)

Keep watching the skies!

Lone

LOL Oneiron, love all your memes! :-D

Keep watching the skies!

caenorhabhditis

ok, be gentle its a sketch for yutani synthetic based on googled image i got when i entered 'japanese tough guy' he just looked the part to me the sketch top right is all me though maybe too small here?
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caenorhabhditis

I picture his creator Mr Yutani as being like ken watanabe and this is a younger meaner version of himself he made to act as his guard and to execute his will in a cold efficient manner with a samurai-esque attitude to loyalty very unlike david in all except poise and ruthlessness

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caenorhabhditis

apologies if i've got the wrong symbols for synthetic.... for all i know it might say nylon or synthetic detergent!

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caenorhabhditis

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